The Lava Story

A long long time ago, as if we were in the days of the dinosaurs lived two proud mauga above and below the pristine Pacific ocean, (Hook/Grabber).These two mauga were deeply in love as if they were Ranginui the sky father and Papatuanuku the earth mother. However, Maungarei stood tall above the sea as if he was Sir Edmund Hillary and Rangitoto below the deep blue sea as if she was the earth's core.

             It wasn’t all happy joy,joy because these two love birds were separated by liters and liters of Pacific ocean and could not see each other as if they were blinded by love.

Maungarei and Rangitoto could not see each other but still communicated through song as if they were big blue whales. - When years past and past Ranginui was growing old and still no one rose up from the sea. Finally Papatuanuku heard and thought that the song was for her. SO Therefore Papatuanuku risen from  as if she was free from jail. Papatuanuku has risen from the deep blue sea but she did not see  Ranginui. Ranginui was singing the lava song so   Papatuanuku could see him.

                   Ranginui was going into the sea and he was so heartbroken that he won't be with the one he loved and his dream to disappear. Ranginui

was in the deep blue sea he heard Papatuanuku singing the song that he used to sing. Finally he had risen from the deep blue sea. Ranginui was happy as if he won the lotto. Ranginui and Papatuanuku  dream is to grow old together and be with each other. When Ranginui and Papatuanuku were together they were so in love as if they were childhood  sweethearts.   

                  THE END

Similes-

Alone- as lonely as the moon.

Love- as if they were childhood  sweethearts.

Happy- as if it was christmas.

Old- as if they were in Egyptian Pyramids.

Sad- sad as the sunless sea

Sleeping- sad as sleeping beauty.

Stone- as if he was the state value of liberty.

Walt- We are learning how to creative Narrative using Similes