Writing- The Secret Forest

One rainy day four kids were  playing hide and seek. They were really excited to play because they have all good ideas. It was , George, Grace and Johnny. Johnny really wanted to play but he needs to do the counting. Emma and the others went to hide and Johnny was counting. George and Grace were hiding in the place,but Emily was hiding inside her new closet. When Emily tried to open the closet because it was stuck. She looked at the corner of the door there was a button so Emily press it. When she opened the door she saw another door that was already opened. She was so scared to go inside it  but,she heard that Johnny was coming up the stairs and almost got in Emily’s room. So she quickly grabbed her torch and went inside the secret passage. Emily turned on her torch and went straight. Emily turned left and started yelling “Hello is anyone here”  while that time Johnny already found Grace and George. All of a sudden there was a strange noise coming from in front of her when, she walked to see what was it and a group of bats flying to her. Emily was scared so she went faster and the torch went out so Emily screamed:                            “SOMEONE HELP ME PLEASE ANYONE SOMEONE HELP” Emily saw something shining and she ran to it and she fell down and bumped her head on the grass on that time Johnny was downstairs he went to the field inside the garage. Johnny said finally I  found you.                                                                                                                 THE END